My Writing

 

For our writing we have been writing Narratives. We have been learning to add a great hook in or opening line to our writing and to start our sentences in different ways.

This week we also had to have a smile and alliteration in our writing. This slide shows my hook in, sentence beginnings, simile and alliteration.

We are using our Kaiwhakarite/Self Manager learning asset by reflecting on our learning.

This is just to say

We looked at the poem by William Carlos, This is just to say.  

 Then we had to write our own poem about one of our experiences.  This is my one.

School Triathlon

 Yesterday we had the school triathlon at Nelson Park and the Enterprise Pool.  

I found it hard chasing Anaru in the pool because he jumped in the pool and I came after him but I did pass him. 

I was in a team with Jodi and Michael.  Jodi ran and came 3 and Michael biked and also came 3 and I swam and came 1st. 

We came first in the boys teams race.  I felt happy and proud of my team.

Te Whare Tapa Wha

 We were learning about Te whare Tapa wha which is HAUORA / health. We were asked to make a connection map to show what hauora looks like for us.

I found it easy to spell all the words.

I found it hard to find all the the images that I wanted to use.

I really enjoyed figuring out what to say.

Next time I need to use more words in my writing.

                     

a typical morning in my house

 

 

fake or real postcard

  we were learning about how to use photoshop and make fake or real images

my favourite part about it was selecting the background

I am joy making fake images for Kasey-Rae